YOU MADE ME SMILE
FOR A LITTLE WHILE
YOUR SILLY LIES
YOUR HIDDEN DISGUISE
LIVING IN A DREAM
NOT ALL YOU SEEM
SO POIGNANTLY SAD
OR IS IT MAD?
FEIGNING ASPIRATIONS
IN UTTER DESPERATION
SO EMASCULATED
UTTERLY FRUSTRATED
PRISONER OF PERCEPTION
LIVING IN DECEPTION
ALTER EGO USING
THINKING YOU’RE CONFUSING
YOU ARE SO NOT DEEP
AS YOUR TEARS YOU WEEP
AND WEEP YOU WILL FOREVER
WHILE WITH EVERYONE YOU SEVER
NEVER KNOWING PEACE OF MIND
TO YOUR TORMENT YOU ARE BLIND
ALL I DO I SAY A PRAYER
AND HOPE YOU WILL FIND
PEACE SOMEWHERE
YOU MADE ME SMILE
FOR A LITTLE WHILE!
Very nice!
aww so good!!!
This is very beautiful and well said.
oh my! you express well the intense emotions of deception and lies, absolutely brilliant…
at least it made you smile …. i love this piece beautiful…
Reblogged this on Ann Novek–With the Sky as the Ceiling and the Heart Outdoors.
I so understand where you are coming from in this one.
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i think a lot of women do! thanks. m.
You followed one of my posts and left a remark or something … may I ask how you found it?
I always look through and pick out the most interesting. lonely m. x
wooww!! It is amazing to have some one who makes you smile, i personally need that right now.. Beautiful poem..
This poem had a interesting way with it. Good stuff.
This piece is awesome. I just wrote something on the subject you might like (well, not just. like a few weeks ago.)
http://yeshivaforum.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/its-a-hell-of-a-town/
I’m getting spoiled for more of your poetry–looking forward to your next installment! Best, Candida
This is a lovely way of looking at a failed relationship. Thank you for your insight.
no probs. glad u enjoyed it xx
This made me smile for a little while
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Please stop by, I have some interesting tests for you to solve. Maybe you’ll like it.
cheers:-)